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[ this isnt war, this is MASSACRE ]

this isnt war, this is MASSACRE
dead and dying, starved and homeless
bombed, phospherus, MURDER

ISRAEL:
zionist, terrorist, racist
state
american watchdog - military base.

two state solution? not possible
- look at the carnage now, after gaza and west bank were
"given" back

from the river to the sea palestine will be free!
no justice no peace! U.S out of the middle east!

the answer lies within the ties of the working class
rise up rise up people of egypt
against the disgusting traitor mubarak!
workers of the middle east seize your power!
refuse to run the gas that israel gets  from you
refuse to run the oil feilds, take back your own power
stop rellying on sellout govts! stop rellying on nationalist groups like fatah sellouts!
take back your power!

workers unite!
occupation is a crime, free, free palestine!

Author notes

sorry im not feeling good and the form of this is shit, but my feelings are there. hopefully my brain will stop being so scattered soon and i can fix it. any and all criticism re writing style is welcome, criticism re political point of view is probably a waste of your time, im not changing my mind.

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  • judmc
    July 2

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    Great Stuff ! ! !

    This is fantastic Becci more power to your elbow
    you tell it as it is, without the frills.If you feel the need for moral support read my "Axis Of Evil"
    "The Liberators" "Freedom" "Mission Accomplished"
    "Wealth" "Starvation Crunch" "National Pride" "The President" "Fidel" Hope you find time Best Wishes
    ....George...


  • butchbec
    January 25
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    yeah i dont think its a poem at all. more of a rant that i didnt get time to put in poem form. dont know that a nuclear bomb will help, being that the palestinians are still livign so close. i like my theory
    "from gaza through to cairo, theres only one solution, end imperialism, we need a revolution"! think of the power held with the workers of the arab lands. wokers unite! etc etc...


  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 21

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    It's not a good poem. But you have the right emotions. What the Israelis need is a good nuclear bomb up their arseholes.


  • inspired-8 gold member
    January 19
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    Your feelings are there very powerful moving write.