My arms will never hold you,
Your name will never pass my lips
Your heart will never beat for me
I'll never feel you kick
My eyes will never see you
Though my tears ever flow
A traitor has riped you from me
Leaving only scars
But my heart will always love you
Whoever, where ever you are
Author notes
This was hard for me
A contest entry
- They sing with Angels by AutumnGypsy.
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Beautiful!!!
Take on the loss of a child---------------
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Wow. This was really deep and emotional. Must've been extremely hard to write. I love the way you use words. You're awesome.
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The world is an ever perpetuating place of trials and tragedies that make the little things seems smaller and smaller, and harder and harder to enjoy all the time.
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A heartwrenching part of you left on paper that's for sure. Did you mean barren? though a traitor has (ripped) Only mistakes were a couple of misspelled words, but I ain't picky, just thought you'd like to know.
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hey thanks for pointing that out lol how embrassing.
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I know how you feel
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I can tell this was very hard for you I am so sorry for your loss there is no worse pain ever thanks for sharing be well
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This poem is so rare. It hurts to read it. The loss of child is what no parent should ever have to endure. Beautiful, heartfelt. The pain eases if we allow ourselves to grieve.
ValkyrieNightWeaver.
Blessings
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sad but I loved it
I loved the way your flow of wods went. I wish I could write about my losses like you, Its just I will get to emotional and woun't be able to see through the tears -
This is powerful and well written. This is a poem I understand very well. Like you, this is something I find very hard to talk about.
Very well done.
Mike
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I'm going to have to stop reading all these poems about lost angel because I'm going to sit in my room at night and cry about everyone else's loss...
the last line though "Whoever, were" I think you mean "where" God bless you
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yes thank you
I always get them confused
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This kind of pain is one they say will lessen but never seems to, to imagine all the moments we will never witness, all the hugs the kisses the I love you's it is sometimes just too much to bear. My heart is with yours and our angels. Best to you sweetheart
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makes me so sad that I will never even get the chance to even know what it feels like to be pregnant
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I am sorry for your loss and the pain, I think, would never diminish.
Thank you for sharing.
Gaylene
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