as i live this life,
so tangeled in these,
black lined figures,
all this madness,
im intwined,
never to forget a day,
never to remember,
intwined in madness,
all seem to be,
but for this fool today,
will forever be intwined,
never to breath another day,
forever twisted,
held together by it all,
the feeling of nothing,
madness,
so deap in soul,
never to recollect,
always changing,
never self,
for every speck of madess in,
forever intwined,
you be.
Author notes
everyone is intwined in madness,
everyday none excape,
never to remember a day, but never to forget a day,
for everyday of madness can be remembered, but forgoten.
A contest entry
- The last stage of any madness, thinkings, feelings, words and more and more by The.poet.of.hearts.
1665 points, ended February 5, 20 entries
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Theme=5.0
Idea=5.5
Emotions=6.4
Feelings=6.2
Words=5.4
Background=5.0
Title=6.5
Passion=5.0
Interest=5.2
Showing the Junoon=5.8
You piece was nice, you wrote it beautifully, but there were typos, and also you couldn't cross the barrier of Junoon. but you tried pretty well.
thanks for entering in my contest
wish you best of Luck
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The poet of hearts and beautiful words
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Put some description as well, and some context, define your poem.
ts not comment and i havn't read it as well, so kindly do the above work
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