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An Earnest Plea

Take my hand
And please oh please
Accept me for once
As I am on my knees
I look up at you
With eyes blue and clear
And ask you to stay
So I can pull you near.
You shake your head
It’s not you I adore
I look quickly away
So you do not see more
My heart is breaking
There is nothing to do
I have no more to say
I’m broken in two.

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  • Violent Glass
    January 18
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    oh this is so sad
    so visual as well
    good write
    thanx for entering


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 18

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    full of emotion, wanting acceptance only to be turned away.... good luck Aussie