I knew what you were thinking
You didn’t have to say a word
The look in your eyes
The tone of your voice
Told me everything I didn’t want to know
It was nothing I said, nothing you did
No reason, no fault
Just gone
So why do I sit here waiting
For my phone to ring,
That special ring that’s only meant for you
This isn’t right
This isn’t fair
You’re so upset,
And I’m not there
Can’t we just get back to me and you?
I didn't go this long,
I wouldn’t fight this hard,
To give up on everything I thought I knew
If I thought this wasn’t true
And if you know it’s you I’m talking to,
Won’t you please pick up the phone?
Tell me that you feel the way I do.
Author notes
Written just now, in a fit of emotion after my boyfriend decided to break up with me. It may not be perfect, but I needed to vent. In my head I can totally hear the country music playing in the background. Hahahaha.
Comments
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Greatness...
Sadly I just came out of a situation like that (2 wks before Christmas of 08) and I just know that you are not alone, sweets! You are not alone.
Pick up, move on (easier said than done..yes), and just forget the loser that dumped you in the first place!! (I know I DID!
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Great write and I felt everything...all the feelings that I had then reflooded my brain. Great job, great flow- great piece!
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pretty good
I was surprised it flowed so well : O
nice write
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