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Beach Magic

BEACH MAGIC

A young boy walks in wavering light,
lost to enigmatic voices propelling
waves vibrant beat from empty porcelain
sea cones. Tiny hands project drifting
sapphire high lighted overtures sung
from deep within skeletal projectiles.
Little feet ooze into granular glitter
igniting an inverse polarization arc
pursing sprays of purple and blue. 

A young girl dances in chaotic chalk,
steps billowed chants super imposed
crimson closure of enchanted hearts.
Tiny hands swing dramatic lances
of cabrioles tender cabaret seducing
remnants of castle sands structure.
Little feet flinches into weeping wet
carousel spinning puppeteers lit
candles flame of cream and red.

A young girl and boy in lovers grasp
cast to erythmatic impulses beckons
wakes sweetened lips of intruding 
sea lilies. Hands envelope inviting
lapses of intersecting intercourse
binding terraces of raptors enclosure.
Feet levitating to inner sanctuaries
of oceans inoculating benevolence
erupting sparks of indigo and violet.   

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  • Cynthia
    August 29

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    Excellent

    Oh wow!!!!
    How could I have missed this one?
    Huh?
    LOL
    CK, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry my friend.
    Well done.

    Keep up with the great work.
    Keep on penning.
    Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.

    *S* Cynthia


    • ckwriter69
      August 30
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      Thanks Cynthia for reading Beach Magic, it was a fun one to write.

  • Oh my gosh Charley. This is truly amazing.


  • Babe, I can feel each word, every phrase deep in my soul..... so for me, you have communicated with me beyond the visual and into my depths.
    That is surely the sign of a good piece of writing.
    Keep your quill filled with ink so that your words never stop flowing.
    Much love to you babe
    Your angel xoxox


    • ckwriter69
      March 4
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      Thank you Angel for your kind words. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Love ya too,
      Charley

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