Dominate.
Aggressive in every sense imaginable.
Conquered every fear; ripping doubt from existence.
Forcibly spoon feeding you trust and happiness that people dream to vision.
Not a democracy.
This is a Dictatorship.
Your rights are forever lost.
Your freedom diminished.
You now belong to me.
Now your half that completes me
will be
Given.
to me.
You are mine.
Yearn to be loved less for I am too much to bare.
Yearn for the will to just think that something must be wrong just to prove that it exist.
Seek the invitation to your gallery of wonderland just to realize the baron space.
You shall lose so much.
Sacrifice so little.
To actually.
Understand
Love.
You are mine.
My power will overwhelm you.
The real answer only you can answer.
Can this be real?
But you wont answer, just live... your life... my life.
My life, my wife, my life.
You wished in doubt for realistic dreams of happiness with me.
Hoping but wondering would this ever be, could this actually be.
I can not fathom this thought process to achieve this right called happiness.
So you lose your rights.
Forever now shall you walk through my shadows.
Shall I see you salivate to my desires and wishes.
For fairytale dreams of romeo and Juliet to diminish.
And raw passionate unadulterated feelings to fuse into you core.
Helplessly losing yourself in this bewilderment of ecstasy.
Captivated by ignorance of your elation.
Prized by one gift.
You are mine.
You can fight for power and even through your victory shall you lose.
Because my war has no artillery. This revolution is irreversible.
You will forever ever live free.
Locked in my cage, free.
The most important in your life.
The most.
You are mine.
A contest entry
- Make me feel! by Babesface.
550 points, ended April 20, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Every wonder how to sike yourself up for the one you love? Just go to the bathroom and say this before you see them.
Comments
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I sense more aggression and power than love here, but you made me feel it which is what I wanted. It's different, and I like that. It has a nice overall shape. Very nicely written.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for enterin -
now why would i ignore someone's whos givin me the best comments i ever get?? haha
duuuuude, this poem freaked the shit out of me. loved it tho ugh



