I want to see your soft body in the moonlight,
I want to dance with you in the pouring rain,
Lay with you beneath a starry night sky,
Say I love you and whisper your name.
I want to ride horses across the countryside,
And walk with you barefoot in the stream.
Share a glass of wine and watch the ocean tide,
And relive it all over again in my dreams.
I want to see the sunlight dancing in your hair,
And go mountain climbing with you at my side.
Sit up top and watch the sunset from there,
And fall asleep beneath that Carolina sky.
I want to kiss you up in a lighthouse tower,
And bathe with you in a mountain stream.
I want to lay with you in a field of wildflowers,
And relive it all over again in my dreams.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt for Love. Points will increase with quality by ShiningNShadows.
400 points, ended January 22, 13 entries
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its what I want to say to my girl.its what we all want to do,its what we know our lover will want us to want.
this poem captures reality and is beautifully written -
this is really sweet...maybe if you added a bit more it could become a song, i would live to hear it if it ever did, but it is wonderful.
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Oh wow. That was amazing. I really loved it. The ending could have been stronger for me, but very nice job. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!!!
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