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Colour me empty [Darker side of me]

I walk in darkness only,
Blacks, purples, greys,
For suffering is my game,
It isn’t just a faze,

Purple is the fear,
Trapped inside my mind,
Creeping in all places,
Throughout the decks of time,

Grey is for empty,
My heart, my soul is bare,
Throughout the deepest places,
It’s just to late to care.

At last we come to black,
The place where I belong,
No shade can top the darkness,
That forms my weeping song. 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 6, 2009

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    How much deep and how much communicative as well..the life and its meanings can only bee shared through poetryas you did..well done..


  • Original Riddle
    January 18, 2009

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    This is a great write, I'm just sorry that you feel like this...
    There is light in the world, I'd love to be able to help you to see it...

    Anyone can overcome themselves. Just be open to love. It took me a while... but I'm getting there... and so can you!!

    I wish you joy. You need some.
    And peace, to rid you of the purple.

    Great write here.


  • Ademon
    January 18, 2009

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    for 14 years old you have an old spirit, this write is simple beautiful and truly deep and inspiring, the darkness and sadness in this poem can be felt and even seen, as I'm sure this poem will touch many because they too feel as you do, and can relate well! Good luck in the contest!