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Remember That Day?

Remember the day I walked into school
and saw the biggest smile on your face?
Remember that same day i showed you my wrists
and your smile faded away?

You told me you wouldn't tell
Well guess what?
Liars go to hell
I can't believe I trusted you
But I should be able to
After all we've been through

Remember the day the school found out
Because you don'y know how to keep your mouth shut?
Remember that same day I had to show the counselor
Every single one of my cuts?

You want attention
so here it is
Everyone hates you
You can't take back your wish
I just wish I had thought this through first
Before you screwed me and made my life worse

So remember the day they took me away
and you forgot your promise to make sure I stay?
Remember that same day you came to visit me
and they told you my life was no longer meant to be?

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  • Im not worthy!

    I have gone throguh that exact same thing.. you painted the feelings and emotions perfectly in this peice. There is nothing wrong with cutting jsut rember that . what ever numbs the pain,

  • hotpinkrabbit94
    January 18
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    its sad!!...i feel lyke i can feel wat she means


  • XxScreamoxX
    January 18

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    Wow strong poem !
    i loved it and your emotion
    I loved every part it seemed to be full of anger
    and the same happened to me
    i loved this parts ...
    You told me you wouldn't tell
    Well guess what?
    Liars go to hell
    I can't believe I trusted you
    But I should be able to
    After all we've been through

    And...
    So remember the day they took me away
    and you forgot your promise to make sure I stay?
    Remember that same day you came to visit me
    and they told you my life was no longer meant to be?