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A Lesson in Serenity

Calm down! Calm down!
You must learn to relax,
'tis I and not your computer
that has crashed.

I got so tired of watching
as you pecked at the keys,
thought I'd give you a lesson
in how to be at ease.

Now watch, observe,
it's simple, don't you see.
Just stretch out, then,
close your eyes like me.

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt kitty napping on computer keys

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  • PinkPony
    January 25

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    HA! A talking computer is just what we need. YIKES! My computer does that already. lol A fun to read poem, oh YES!


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 25
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    this was nicely done and I enjoyed it
    thank you for entering my contest.
    best of luck to you.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    January 19

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    Aww this is so cute, and funny. It made me smile.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Skybow silver member
    January 19

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    I really liked this poem and the advice about relaxing. You kept it simple and very real and spot on the picture prompt...Nice one!


  • maralisa silver member
    January 18

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    aw wow a beautiful poem it resinates the image promt wonderfully good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Lexie
    January 17

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    haha, i love this poem. it is something i can relate to. i hate when my computer starts acting up. but i do have to admit, when it does mess up, i do take a break off it for a while and just sit back and relax.

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