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When I Look Into Your Eyes

When I look into your eyes,
I see how you feel,
I see your beauty,
Blossomed roses,
Glittering with the morning dew,

I see your love for him,
Unconditional,
Doing what makes him happy,
Even if it hurts you,
I act like I don't see,
I know your not a fool,
Just blinded by love,

When I look into your eyes,
I see your feelings for me,
Feelings of friendship,
Annoyance,
And tired of hearing what I say,
Telling you of what I see him do,
Hurting you,
Saying this hurts you,
I see it in your eyes,
So I stop,
Cause I love you,

I look into your eyes and see,
You love him,
Not me,
Eyes don't lie,
Goodbye......

A contest entry

my name is righteous14 and well this is what i write, sorry if you dont like it, i know it sucks......

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  • StillLovingYou
    January 18
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    it doe snot suck so keep on writing i loved this one
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