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Fork in the Road

God can only tell me,
what I've done wrong,
loving you,
has been wonderful,
its been so scrumptous,
decadent,
euphoric,
serene.

I love you,
Can't help but love you,
like tea and cookies,
a perfect match,
spaghetti and meatballs,
got nothin on us babe.

So look me in the eyes,
and tell me you want it to end?
What did you take?
What are you abusin?
If not your own heart.

Let my feelings,
be your drug.
let my arms,
hold you high,
you're my cherry blossum,
my pookie,
my lovely lover,
my constant,
and sporadic,
you are mine,
thank you for loving me too,
we'll pull through,
we just got to.

Author notes

"a rose by any colour and blue daisies"

this isn't about what it seems. my boyfriend and i have been having trouble recently because we're having trouble getting to see each other and we just can't always be together. he wasn't sure if we should stay together, but i convinced him otherwise. this was just what was going through my mind at the time.

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  • HopeForCysters
    January 20, 2009
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    nice write. I know what it's like. My fiance is a 45 minute drive away and he works full time and goes to school 5 days a week. But we'll be celebrating our 1 year anniversery in Feb. If you two love each other, you'll make it work. good luck thank you for entering