Go downtown,
Catch the early movie
The shows are cheaper,
They don't mind
If you put your feet up
She's out on the highway
She's got a homemade sign
It says
"Go ahead, try to figure out
What my future looks like"
I don't want to live my life
Like a story
Always thinking I
Could've been something
Don't run alongside and control me
Just film away and let me be
At ease
I feel fine
I'll move on,
I'll go on
There's something so divided
Don't worry about me
I'll be fine
Don't live your life
For me or for anyone
You live your life as if you're one
Live your life as if you're one
Find quiet,
It's awful quiet
How can you be mad,
We've just got started
I want to shave my head
And lie in bed all day long
How can you be mad,
We've just got started
Live your life as if you're one
Live your life as if you're one
At ease, I, I feel fine
I'll go on, I'll move on
Don't live your life like a movie
Always thinking you
Could've been something
Find quiet, it's awful quiet
Find quiet
Tell me what you think
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Just saying what everyone else said with the fact that it is like a song (I now know it was intended
) Nicely done! I like the ending the best, but the whole poem flows very well. Good job, Gabi *pats*
Syd
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Thanks Brad! I'm glad you liked it xD
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Brad is pleased
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GOOD HE BETTER BE
xD
Did you ask the pot head yet? -
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Bout what?
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Uhm
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I really don't know...
I just wasn't sure what to comment back
And as you know,
We can't just STOP
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Very nice! This had a nice, lyric-like flow. This would make a wonderful song, even if that was intended or not. A great write, and keep up the good work!
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=] Thanks for the comment!
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sounds like a song....is it?
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Lol. Yup xD
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