Your smile lifts me to heights unknown,
Let me kiss away your tears.
Here I'm hidden alone in my sanctuary,
Let me strike down all your fears.
Speak to me oh angelic voice,
Please prove to me you're real.
Tune out all those who'd wish us harm,
And show me forever how to feel.
For in a world where sadness rules,
Let my love flow like a damn.
Cause no matter what the outcome,
I just want you to know who I am.
Author notes
for an amazing contest idea.... :-)...... Iris Rules!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A contest entry
- I'd Give Up Forever To Touch You by PastelMoons.
1000 points, ended January 20, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
when everything's made to be broken, are you willing to put yourself out there?
Comments
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This is amasing i think i have fallen in love with it, it had me in a total dream!!
Well done
Jezz -
wow this is an amazing poem! Your a rockin writer! All those words spoke to me as if your were reading them to me in a dream or something! I must check out more poems by you!
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GOOD!
A very moving concept. However I think you could've took this even further by including a life experience and having the voice of the angel or the angel itself saving you from such turmoil. Then again, this is still quite an amazing piece I have to say! My favorite lines in this piece are the first three when you say "Your smile lifts me to heights unknown,
Let me kiss away your tears.
Here I'm hidden alone in my sanctuary." I can forever relate to that wording. Slight revision needed but overall this is a good work.
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You are talented. A very beautiful piece indeed. Full of love and honesty. Keep at it.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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This is really amazingg.
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iris by goo goo dolls? i like it i havent published anything yet havent had a chance but will do
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yes the very same
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i really love this
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Hi i like your poem!!
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very good write
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Great write!
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Woww.....
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Great write
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wooooow honeyyy this is amazinng
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You are one of those people that when you love, you love with all your heart. I'm that way too. Your flawless piece is nothing less than amazing. I know it seems like I am repeating myself but, they are Sara
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wow babe i really like that poem <3
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Wow this is very beautiful!!
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Beautiful!
Thank you so much
for your entry
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i love it baby.... iris is my faveorite song... and this poem is sooooo good <3
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