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Two Sides...

Twisting inner turmoil,
Bedlam....broils,


Below the placid,


Tranquil waters....

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Been a long time...

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  • moondance20
    February 3
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    wow thats really powerful for how short it is! good luck


  • maralisa silver member
    January 18

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    aw wow a brilliantly powerful ten words good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 18
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    creatively drawn... x


  • Grey Mouser
    January 17

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    Much lies hidden neath the surface, where a flurry of activity awaits. Powerfully written, best to you.
    GM