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Look at me now

Look at me now
Is this what you wanted
Everyday is the same
So much hatred and pain
Doesn't matter
I don't care
It makes me so alive
Now I struggle
One day I will perservere
You will regret
All my held back fears
My tears are all dried
No longer they exist
I count my way to false happiness
Followed by red lines of truth
I will never be the same
Not for me and not for you
Back off me now
It's too late for help
Won't you join my personal hell?

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  • love it

    followed by red lines of truth; i love this line, nice way to describe it. nice wording altogether a nice poem