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Love= Heartache

Why did you leave?
To love another peron?
You left me to grieve
Over you and the love we shared
Is this what it's like?
When loves' not fair?

She can't love you like i can....

I gave everything to you,for you
How can you just leave?
And walk away from me?
Is this how you want me to live?
By wishing everyday that i were dead?
Do you not feel even an ounce of regret?
For ruining my life?
For breaking my heart?

Before you go, I have something to say.

Thank You.

Thank you for showing me
that no one can be trusted.
Thank you for proving to me
that everyone hides on the inside.
And thank you for making me realize
that you can never be too careful with who you give your heart too.

THANK YOU.

this was just a random sad poem. im just alittle down in the dumps.... :* { and no mary, its not based on or for anyone. dont worry. but i still love you.

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  • Heartbreaker Eyes
    January 17

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    Just what a person needs when they feel sick and low...a depressing love poem....Myah...still though, I liked it...made me feel even more rotten. Thank you. Bravo. Confetti.