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About A Girl

These scars on my wrists
Hidden by the sleeves
Are the story of a girl
And the way that she grieves

These bruises on my body
Marks the cruelty of society
Against a young outspoken girl
Who stands against propriety

The thoughts within my brain
Shows the onset of insanity
Forced upon a girl
by the failures of humanity

The remains that are left
Demonstrate how I was
The cool and charming girl
And everything she does.

I don't know how to say
The words that plead to be spoken
The toughts that need actions
My promise to them is broken


Add these things together
And guess your best shot.
The sum equals me.
The girl that was forgot.



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  • Demetria
    February 1, 2009

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    ".......These bruises on my body
    Marks the cruelty of society
    Against a young outspoken girl
    Who stands against propriety

    The thoughts within my brain
    Shows the onset of insanity
    Forced upon a girl
    by the failures of humanity........"

    No offense, love, but I didnt know you knew words that big. Im impressed. Seriously. Thats also my favorite part.


  • we-are-already-dead
    January 19, 2009

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    awwww hunney its so sad......... I like it but its so sad.....I promise not to forget you hun.


  • Yesterdays Memory
    January 18, 2009

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    OMG I love it

    I love it, it is a wonderful write and it reminds me of me because I feel like I am the girl that everyone has forgot... keep on writing