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Count To Ten With Me.


To embark on our fragile journey,
is to stare right through space.
To politely flash a bitter sweet smile,
is to patiently wait for one in return.

To clear up my vision,
is to realize the future bottles up  affection.
To explode with affection,
is to share a hug; share a kiss.

To admitting to mistakes and blame,
is to sacrifice a life for a friend.
To generously distribute a dozen roses,
is to accept a thank you.

 

To address a meaningful 'I love you,'

is to knowingly expect no answer.

 

 

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  • AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

  • lemonlover14
    March 21
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    extremely

    yah

  • lemonlover14
    March 21

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    very pretty, complex language
    i like how the words sound
    mystifying
    like a spell
    it brought up ideas would never have thought about
    and now I'm still not sure if i get it
    but it sounds really cool!
    your a genius
    i want you to take this onto a mountain and shout it to the world
    and see if it changes people
    because i think it will, even if they don't have a clue of what you're talking about
    yay


  • liltulip gold member
    February 21
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    this is beautiful!

    i love it!


  • Nikki22
    January 30

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    Very well written. Keep up the good work.
    My favorite line was the very last part of this poem. Good job.


  • forevermyangel14
    January 17

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    oooooh that's cool. it makes you think. all of it is true esp the last line i love it

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