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I Caught Myself

i caught myself today
thinking about you...
where we stand and the past.
twas then i realized i gave you my heart.
you may not know it however.
but twas given to you awhile back.
i caught myself today.
wondering "what if"...
what if those dreams we have both had, came true...
what if they are what they seem???
i caught myself today
thinking and wondering ... about you...

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  • Moonlight Mistress
    April 28

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    Wow

    Very real. It's relevant to my most recent poem and how I was feeling when I wrote it so I can relate. Nice Job!


  • Injury
    January 17
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    Impact

    This was an amazing write. I like how you wrote broke up the sections, "I caught myself...."