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i want you no more

i sat there the other day
and saw you when you entered the gym.
your eyes were as dark as the leaves at night...
then i noticed her next to you...
"shes pretty" i couldnt help but to think.
yet...i still wanted you.
knowin all thats happened...
knowin the truth now...
i still wanted you...

but i finally realized something...
i deserve better than that.
i no longer want you...

im happy.

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  • Kaspurboi
    March 29

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    you be happy! sometimes it takes some crazy actions and then some to realize what it is you deserve but im glad that ur happy ! Fantastic write girl and if u ever decide to quit writing i will find u and haunt u!