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Life...

Awash on a tide of broken dreams,
Simmering in the fallout,
Tracing strands of hope,
Greeting the shackles of despondency.

Restrained rapture for time previous,
Drowning in the waves of regret,
Decisions left with no resolve,
Life is evanescent.

I lay on the sands of collapse,
Trapped in a frozen moment,
Life's motion a darken stain,
I am descending evermore....

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In a strange place.....seems to be my place of rest

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  • maralisa silver member
    January 17

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    aw wow a wonderful take on the promt I love your imagery and emotions there wonderful good luck in the contestmaralisa