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Rebecca Lawerencia

Rebecca Lawerencia,
lived in a grassy savanna.

Rebecca created a quilt
    ,for the cold.

Rebecca's kind to the
animals when we duck
down under in Australia.
She gives wombats water.

At the end of the day,
  when we're cold
    and far away,
Becky hugs me in
the quilt , it's OK.

Author notes

This is a fun poem I wrote in my late teens it was inspired by a real girl named Rebecca who had a different last name and was my friend. I sort of had a crush on her, but never told her.

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