Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Heart of the She Wolf

Something primal from deep inside.
Unanticipated screams out in howls.
Some moving sense of  feeling alive,
Erupts freely in voice of clarion laud.

No earthly vice restrains my spirit.
For it can not be suppressed.
Nor can I contain the wild within it.
That essence volatile of innocence best.

In ferocity I proclaim my rights.
With no wholes barred of freedom. 
Blood coursing through me I'm alive,
And I let no foe find me sleeping.

Impermeable is the flesh of my soul,
Though my dusty bones be reclaimed.
Not even death can devour me whole,
And spiritual being is my name.
~~Suseann~~
Copyright © Carrol Denny all rights reserved;

image url; http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Item/4963/797.jpg?1233511991


A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 9 of 9
  • luvdrkchocolate
    January 19

    Edit | Reply
    Oh. This is a fun little poem that you have going on in here. I loved the border that you have for this page too. It fits in with the mood of your poem so well. As I was reading this I could just feel the wind whipping through my hair and the howl of a wild creature. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.


  • Echos in Silence
    January 19

    Edit | Reply
    In ferocity I proclaim my rights.
    With no wholes barred of freedom.
    Blood coursing through me I'm alive,
    And I let no foe find me sleeping.


    the wording of the entire poem is incredible! keep writing!


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    January 19
    Edit | Reply

    is awesome right, simply beautiful

    wow,, i so love this poem, truely amazing and beautiful, am sure glad i got to read it,,


  • Silent Wayfarer
    January 19

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful! So natural and spiritual. Moving. It's so powerful! I love every bit of this peice. So much thought and emotion had to be put into it! Great job!


  • desert places
    January 18
    Edit | Reply
    This is absolutely gorgeous. Pure soul....pure poetry.


  • JinSays gold member
    January 18

    Edit | Reply
    Ohmy,
    THIS is what I was searching for.
    WOW.
    That's all I can say.

    In ferocity I proclaim my rights.
    With no wholes barred of freedom.
    Blood coursing through me I'm alive,
    And I let no foe find me sleeping.

    Okay, WOW again, as I think it's definitely warranted.
    Thank you for this, you've awakened whatever it was inside of me that needed to host this prompt.
    Love,
    jin

  • Bob Fox
    January 17

    Edit | Reply

    Poet

    Excellent. Seems with all the gibberish I sometimes pen I need an eye opener to the true beauty of poetry.

    • suseann
      January 17
      Edit | Reply
      It's never gibberish when it's real. And you pen in real hues Poet.Thank you.

1 - 9 of 9