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well-intentioned

i had a dream

relegated
to the silent, circular corner
which candor shoved me into

unable to move
neither flesh nor bone
filling every pore
of the fragmented walls
that spoke
profound phrases
permanently etching themselves
into failing memory



resistance is futile


Author notes

--Honesty

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  • silverscent gold member
    January 27

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    The final line is the one that means most to me, then again it's quite a well known phrase.
    The use of diction makes this write very potent. I enjoyed the read very much. Thanks for entering.