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Beard Beard
Disappeared.
Shaven in the night.

A contest entry

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  • hilarious!

    thank you for shaaring this one...I got a big chuckle out of it. good luck with the contest entry. peace and light, kp


  • turpentine
    January 22
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    It is so short but yet so long. So full. Someone who wasn't in touch with creativity, who doesn't find beauty in words would just pass it by but I could read it a hundren more times and still ponder the meaning...
    Now I read the comments below where mine will sit and see they think it is funny. Is it supposed to be? If it is, sorry I saw a creative master peice..


  • Heroesrox
    January 20
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    Cute and short! I really liked this, though! I hope that you keep writing funny ones like this! Thanks so much for sharing it with us here! Keep up the great work and don't forget to return commenting favors!


  • Sai Amartya
    January 18
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    I'll admit. It had me laughing. Very good. Hilarious.