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Sweetheart

 

Seducer of my heart and soul

Whispers words I long to hear

Exploring my innermost thoughts

Eager to hold me ever so near

Tender kisses that melt my heart

Hungers to satisfy my every desire

Excites me with an intimate touch

Absolute and total devotion

Romantic fantasies are fulfilled

Thankful for the love we share

 



This is why I call you sweetheart

 

 

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Background By: Little Eagle
Acrostic Style
Dedicated To My Husband Maxboy



Prompt: Papers Contest ~ Option #2 ~ Love Poem





Gold, HM(2)

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A contest entry

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  • Ami
    September 2

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    Wow this is a really amazing acrostic It was cool how you used a pink background and some red writing to go with the love themed poem congrats on the 2 h.m's


  • condor gold member
    August 21

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    That is adorable and I know Maxboy loved it to. You have a very special gift in allowing yourself to reveal some very deep and personal emotions, and an even greater gift of being able to explore them in words. Congrats on the hm and thanks for sharing.


    • doolie gold member
      August 22
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      Thank you my friend for your wonderful comment. I like your new picture.


  • daviscth silver member
    February 9

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    This is such a sweet acrostic and I just love the impish background. What a great combination. Thanks for sharing with me.

    • doolie gold member
      February 10
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      Thank you Cathy for your wonderful comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. This is the only acrostic that I've done. I was happy with the way it came out.


  • Papers
    February 9

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    Very sweet, indeed! I love acrostics, though I don't do many myself. This was a truely great piece and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work!


  • Captain Obvious
    February 6
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    very cute. :]
    best of luck!


  • sanguigno
    February 6
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    aw. very cute he must be proud to be your sweetheart


    • doolie gold member
      February 18
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.

  • MarkReeves
    February 4
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    Very nice Acrostic

    This is lovely. Thank you for entering and giving me the pleasure of reading it.


    • doolie gold member
      February 4
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      Thank you very much for you wonderful comment. I'm happy that you enjoyed my write.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 4
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    Very good poem...thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest lots of love...


    • doolie gold member
      March 3
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      Thank you so much for your nice comment and for putting on the contest.


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    February 3

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    Oh this is adorable!!!!

    Wonderfully written acrostic - I rarely like acrostics but this one is so perfect!

    What an excellent anniversary/ Valentine's Day poem!!!!

    Thanks for entering!

    • doolie gold member
      February 3
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. This was my first try at an acrostic. I wanted to do something special for my husband for Valentine's Day. It was a total suprise to him since I've only been writing since the 1st of January. He really loved it and that made my day.


  • Ez Writer silver member
    January 29

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    A lovely and elegant work of art !!
    A pleasure to read - indeed !
    Best wishes !! Friend Easy

    • doolie gold member
      January 29
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. It was written for my hubby and I wanted it to be special. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write. *smile*


  • wondering.willow
    January 29
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    i love this,
    very different from what i've seen
    <3


    • doolie gold member
      February 6
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed my write.


  • just sam
    January 28

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    Absolutely gorgeous. I love that you can use the acrostic style, and make it mature. Well done, this is a truly beautiful piece.


    • doolie gold member
      January 29
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm happy that you enjoyed my acrostic write.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 27

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    aaaaaaaaw, this is so romantic and sweet. He's lucky to have you! Thanks for entering my contest. It's a pleasure to read your work!

    • doolie gold member
      February 9
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      Thank you Kim for your wonderful comment. I'm lucky to have him, too.
      Thanks for the contest. It was my pleasure to enter it.


  • echo-ink
    January 26

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    This acrostic was beautifully sentimental, congrats on the trophy's, doolie, YEAH!

    • doolie gold member
      January 26
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      Thank you sis. I'm glad you like it. I have a gold trophy on it, too. I accidentally removed it this morning. Boy was I sick. But theres not anything I can do about.
      Thanks sis for the applause.


  • RedAquarius
    January 26
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    Nice acrostic and full of personal sentiment. Thank you for sharing.


    • doolie gold member
      January 26
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment. I'm so glad that you enjoyed my acrostic.


  • penman gold member
    January 26
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    Excellent

    Terrific write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • doolie gold member
      January 26
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      Thank you so much penman. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 23

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    Humm..very thoughtful work..and quite an intimate story you have shared about the sentiments of your heart..well done....and thanks for sahring..

    • doolie gold member
      January 23
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment. I really liked writing for your contest. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write.


  • Haygood gold member
    January 22
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    I love acrostics.

    This is a good one. Well done.

    • doolie gold member
      January 22
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. This is my first gold trophy. I'm so proud.
      Thanks for the applause.

  • Judith Chandler
    January 21
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    A nice romantic acrostic, well crafted


    • doolie gold member
      January 21
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 20

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    excellent~

    What a beautiful loving Acrostic
    So wonderful to have love like that isn't he
    He is my big brother and your husband
    I am so glad you both have a loving relationship like that
    Congrats on the previous trophy's
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

    • doolie gold member
      January 20
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      Thank you sis, I'm so happy that you like my write. This was my first gold and I couldn't be more thrilled. He is lucky, isn't he. Hehehe!!! Don't forget to tell him that. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Looking forward to getting to know you more. 'sss

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    January 20

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    omg this was so sweet! the emotions, and how it feels to be in a relationship with that lucky someone. amazing write and keep up the good work! good luck in the contest!

    • doolie gold member
      January 20
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my write. I am very lucky to have that special someone in my life to inspire me.


  • Chocoholic156
    January 20

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    Very sweet! I love this! You did a good job in touching all of the aspects of a relationship at its heart. Thank you for entering in this contest, and keep writing.


    • doolie gold member
      February 8
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.


  • Mekhala
    January 20

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    Very beautiful! Well written...I like your way of writing a lot...thanks a great deal for the entry! Good Luck!
    Regards,
    Mekhala


    • doolie gold member
      January 20
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I'm pleased that you like my write.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    January 18
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    Wonderful
    Thank you for your entry

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 18

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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

    • doolie gold member
      January 20
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      WOW!!! Thank you so much Josie. This is my very first Gold. I'm delighted that you enjoyed my write.
      Again, Thank You.


    • doolie gold member
      January 19
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 18

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    lovely acrostic

    poetry such as this shows a romance in form rarely seen in acrostics, thank you for this entry, good luck
    mm

    • doolie gold member
      January 18
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      WOW!!! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and the honorable mention.
      I'm so pleased that you liked my write.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 18

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    Aww such a loving and tender poem, full of emotions. Beautifully done hunni, and I love the background! Good luck in the contest


    • doolie gold member
      January 18
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed my write.


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 17

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    A wonderful acrostic sweetheart, well done.

    Beautiful....Best wishes in the contest


    • doolie gold member
      January 17

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      Thank you sweetie. I'm please that you like it.

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