You caught my eye
I cannot deny
even though I am shy
I will not lie
how you make me sigh
feelings we must tie
before another buys
please take my reply
for I cannot deny
A contest entry
- Funny Valentine by A floatingleaf.
1000 points, ended February 1, 2009, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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short, sweet and snappy. Best of luck in the contest.
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Short and sweet, thanks for entering my contest, good luck...
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I like how short this is, i think it adds to its effectiveness, nice rhyming as well. Rhyming is something i cant do
sometimes i try though xD great work again =)
Laura
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