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Psalm 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I will fear no evil, for you are with me: you rod and your staff, they comfort me.

  I walk through the valley
      I see no fear in me
I just see Jesus there beside me
  telling me that its ok i will guide
                you around
  So i follow him through the valley
          to a well where there
    is a woman getting water for me
Then, Jesus saves me and i cry "holy, holy,holy"
Im free at last now i cant go see the devil

i know this isnt a poem but i dont care so dont tell me its not a poem

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  • if you say so girlie..............you didnt make this up lol, i know better than that.

    im jus kidding with you.. i dont know what else to say except that... okay?