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Feline Ferocity

Walking grace and firebrand
Adorns the blessed forest land.
Childlike eyes, innocent face.
Lethal sight and fatal chase.
Porcelain glow with divine charm.
For you I wish away all harm.

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Prompt:-
With his magical influence;
‘Tell him what you would wish from your love’

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  • nature
    January 28

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    You...

    ...have captured the picture well in such short lines. A 7-7-7-7-8-8.
    Your love to see that no harm comes to the tiger is very endearing.
    Thanks for entering the contest with best wishes.


    • RT KatPat
      January 28
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      Thank you... for ur heartfelt response I absolutely wish harm away from ALL life forms. Thankyou for hosting the contest.. the topic was so lovely that inspired me to write even though i had a very heavy economics lecture to prepare for my class