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Swayed

Tempting beauty
Innocent belle
Flirtatious grasp
Sweet as sin…

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9 words only. No more, no less.

Prompt:
"The girl with the pretty face
is out picking olives.
The wind, playboy of towers,
grabs her around the waist. "

from Arbolé, Arbolé . . . by Federico García Lorca.

Hey Amaranthine Lover hope it made you salivate

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  • Ithica silver member
    January 17
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    What a provocative blend!!! A Sweet-Tart success! Congrats. on the Bronze!!!

  • a very fine, sexy piece!

    thanks for taking your time to enter, it is much appreciated.

  • Thanks so much for taking your time to enter my itty bitty little quickie!!!

  • I liked the way you showed both sides to one person here.