It starts with
just a glimpse.
a gentle touch,
and a soft kiss.
Clothing shed
as need builds.
A hunger that
needs to be sated.
Undeniable thirst
only lover's quench.
Tangled limbs,
like puzzle pieces
One ends, one begins;
melding together,
and burning with desire.
Our words, lyrics of lust,
and melodies of moans.
A symphony of passion;
the building cresendo.
Lost in the moment
A union unbroken.
No death or life;
only the light of our love.
And then...
Held in the warmth
of your embrace,
heartbeats in unison,
hands to hold,
living in the afterglow
of our love,
our redemption.
Author notes
Pic Credit http://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/0O7JwgeMa7Ijg1obnp3Qxw?authkey=kZh6DuUTE_U&feat=directlink
Message for Amelus: Our sins of yesterday are forgiven, when we truly love ourselves, and share in that true love, our redemption.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Erotic Quill Challenge - Round 1 by Corvus Corone.
1000 points, ended February 7, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - within your arms, I feel by Remnant.
430 points, ended February 18, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Path to Redemption by MichaelLeeSmyth.
1200 points, ended November 19, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
Comments
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I would hope that all of us have had this in our lives, I know that are those who have had it and let it drift away. Redemption can truly be found in the arms of a lover, sometimes you can look in their eyes and find that it has gone.
Peace.
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you are so right
it is easily taken away, it takes such work to keep it together, but ultimately, love ourselves, and we can share in that peace and love with another, with no expectations, no needs, no wants....just love. if we lead with love we find our soul's desire.
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i like the power of suggestion in this piece, and in context with the other poems from your adult list, it completes a picture of a well rounded, nubile libido worthy of poetic expression. -regards
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A symphony of Heavenly love
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mmmmmmmmm girl your good.. I loved it.
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Thank you for your entry and welcome to the Erotic Quill Challenge.
Some very passionate imagery. The use of short lines added to the feel of urgency and need, however a few of the line breaks interrupted the flow and the action of the poem. A strong entry and we look forward to reading more of your work in the next rounds.
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thank you for the opportunity
and the comments, i look forward to the next round!!!
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Very beautiful and sensually written!
I loved every line in this one.
Well done and good luck to you here!
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thanks so much!
Your comments are very much appreciated!!!
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Nice description, a rythmn pattern that contains a sense of urgency. You accomplish a lot with short phrases and focused imagery. Impressive.
Love, Tom B.
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thank you!
your comment is very much appreciated!
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