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Ballad of Love on the Bayou, Pt. 2

Now, Miss Olivia was not
an ordinary belle,
just take one look:
it's easy to tell.
A delicate beauty,
but not too prissy ~
don't mess with her
'cause she ain't no sissy!

Her hair was done
in loose flowing curls,
not no boo-font do
like them other girls.
No poofy dresses,
she loved blue jeans ~
she was far from "proper"
by any means.

Don't get me wrong,
our Miss ain't that shady ~
she enjoyed her life,
but she's still a lady.
Sunday mornings
she sang in the choir,
her voice made angels
dare to aspire.

One early morn
she went a strollin'
on the bayou where
she saw Hank a trollin'.
Olivia'd seen him before,
Hank, with his rod an' reel,
she liked his charm
and youthful appeal.

She tried peaking,
but stepped in sunlight ~
Hank had seen her,
his smile turned so bright!
She and Hank, they
hit things off so well,
like life-long friends:
who could tell?

She was a redneck girl,
born an' raised,
but when she looked at Hank
her eyes over-glazed
with love or affection ~
perhaps a li'l of each
(her heart began to soar
higher than she could reach).

More could be said,
but here's where they started ~
Olivia an' Hank
would soon ne'er be parted.
Smitten, for sure --
not one heart, but two!
This is their ballad of

love on the bayou.

 

 

Author notes

Name Prompt: Olivia
Choose to write in poetic prose or poem, vignette or form it’s up to you
I want you to characterize this person and give a snapshot of their life

Part 1 of this Ballad:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4961953

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  • Kuranya gold member
    January 30, 2009

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    What a cheeky way to continue the story, I love this continuation of the last piece, it finally felt finished. Well done. Best to you in the contest