If I were to fade away
give the world up
today
Throw my arms in the air
and to myself
never had to compare
If I laughed at the world
nothing 's gone wrong
life would be a simple swirl
and much too
long
If I tried to see the sun
in a mist of rain
soaking wet and I start to run
saying things no one can
explain
If everything is about to end
and what we do goes astray
can you go on a whim
and let yourself go
today?
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i liked it,beautifully written. I loved how each stanza touched emotions that some people may feel about life especially the last stanza, cause the last stanza really touched me.
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Delightful flow to a great piece! Thanks for sharing this one with us here at AP! Hope you keep penning greatness like this for us to read! Again, an awesome job!
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nice flow && i simply enjoyed the write mucho
keep it up hun..xoxox
Vanna
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That was really quite good Kia!
Great job! Keep it up! And thanks for the great read!
<3 Abi
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i really like this as each stanza as i read it was very thought provocking, i like the 2nd stanza , perhaps life would feel too long if nothing went wrong, i really did stop at that stanza and think about what you had written there, in fact im still pondering on that one!!
thankyou for a very thought provocking read here.
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Thank you.
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