I feel the waves of sanity slipping away
To feel my hands on your throat
to feel the life leave your body
with every struggle
How does it feel to be at the end
The end of the line
The end of my rope
The end of you
at the hands of your captive
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Picture by: http://CelestialRaine.deviantart.com/art/dead-end-53075826
This is an old one thought i would bring it back
A contest entry
- The Darkwrite Challenge (Season 6) by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
400 points, ended March 27, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short but darkly sweet. I like the punch you pack in so few words, and find I can somewhat relate..lol. Excellent piece. Thanks for entering and good luck
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I loved how much this really says for being such a short write. It has power and depth, darkness through to the core.
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment
it is very much appreciated
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I have been through this and can relate in a big way Well done and good luck
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Thank you very much for your comment
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SHIVERS!
Shivers! and goos bumps
Not jsut saying this to return the favor, I really Like the anger and passion you put into eahc one! I enjoy each write more and more, though
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awww thank you
yep i like this one to. i enjoy writing the creepy writes
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Oh wow that was intense
I love the power in your words
revenge is sweeeet!
I adore this
Thanks for sharing
~Pastel
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Well thank you dear this is an oldie but i like it so much i had to put it up
Thank you for reading me and for your wonderful comments hun
always means alot to me
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