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Comfort Zone



Standing on an ‘X’ spot
My inner black dot;

Stretching for my radius
To bind my callus;

Forming diameter
A heavy border;

At last a full circle
Where I could crumble.

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    January 24

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    It takes so much to move us through life,
    it requires a formiable sacrifice of energy to form
    ourselves in a constant dance of give and take.
    This write pinpoints much with exacting imagery and metaphor. Glad to see it appreciated with gold. Blue


  • Danna Hobart
    January 23
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    I like the motion of this piece. Thank you for entering.