Standing on an old dam wall, just listening to the sounds of the bush.
He takes her hand and leads her out further.
They stand and gaze out over the water…
Looking up at him and smiling she says, “I love you.”
He looks deep into her eyes and sees exactly what she means.
Slowly he goes down on one knee and asks
“Will you marry me?”
With tears in her eyes she replies, “Yes.”
Beautiful diamonds and gold slip onto her finger.
They slowly walk back to shore
Love beaming from every pore.
And now the planning starts…………….
Author notes
Written about Eugene & Charlene.... They get married on April 3rd.
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Aaaaaw! I didn't even know you wrote this for them! Very well done! I think it captured that moment quite perfectly.
Its good to have you back writing! I also haven't in a while...
Luv
Tristan
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this made me smile
a fairytale like engagement
but I love you how you ended it
and brought them
back to reality...with the planning
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Thank you very much. This is exactly how it happened in real life. So for some there really are fairytales..... Thanks for your comment!!
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what a beautiful poem! It's so sweet. Not to mention romantic, of course. Who wouldn't live a proposal like that?
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Thanks so much. I am looking forward to showing Charlene (the soon to be Bride) the poem and your lovely comments.
Thank you for you comment!!
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