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For J (Why I love you)

I love you because you can make me laugh
No matter what is going on in my world

I love you for the things you do
How you make me feel like I'm the only girl

I love you because of your intelligence
You're always teaching me something new
Plus you never call me dumb
You're one of the smartest people I know

I love you because of who you are
A sweet and gentle man
Who wears his heart on his sleeve
And lets his emotions show

I love you because you understand
And you don't judge me at all
For the things that I've done in my life
Or the things that I haven't done yet

I love you because you
Made me feel this way
Made me moon over you
When we haven't even met

I love you because I always have
And I always will

Author notes

Ok don't judge to harshly. I haven't written in a while and I really felt like I needed to., this came out

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  • jadeangyal
    January 23
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    You haven't even met? This line really surprised me. I was enchanted by your poem up to that point. Is this about someone you know from AP? I will assume that it is something like this, and on that note, I really like this poem. You have captured some of the best things about a good relationship.