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overnight

So I know that it could be the blood

that I’ve mentioned too often

building up in a shaking mist, a clot

condensed, sinking. And I know

 

that it could be the rain

turning gold as fire in the dust

from the streetlamp, howled out by the wind

through my dream all night.

 

And that you might have nothing

to do with it, though we danced

in this dream, and turning in circles

walked up and down the stairs.

 

I woke up. Daylight had switched off

the lights on the street. The wind

had died, and the rain, spattered in drops

across the window, was small and cold,

looked more like snow.

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  • Death of the Author
    January 22, 2009

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    it could be the rain
    turning gold as fire in the dust
    from the streetlamp - perfectperfectperfect

    and the rain - the end = inspired.


  • righteousme
    January 17, 2009

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    And that you might have nothing

    to do with it, ... that line gutted me . like , here i am spilling it onto you . but you might not even be part of it ... how we tend to deviate things onto others ... thank you so much for your time and talent in this contest!!!