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Chao (Unsorted Void)

Under upwards shading skin
black egg drum thin, stretched
between here and great spirit,
pastel shell, trumpet flair, antenna
broadcast coerced energy against gravity
pellets, void the noise and the leaves,
white bark nothing-but treestands,
sound sucking snow, and a view
of a hole
  in a hole
    in a hole
      in a hole
        in a hole
          in a hole...
this nucleus, true            .

Author notes

Loosely inspired by "House of Leaves" (google it)

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  • RamblingRose
    January 17
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    Wow. Very creative and such good rhythm!