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Fingers Snapping

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Fingers Snapping
senryu
©copyright 2009 Bonita M Quesinberry


Come sing His praises
to hearts beating peace and joy
feet tapping our love



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  • drifting cloud silver member
    January 22
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    nicely done. uplifting and cheerful.


    • BonnieQ silver member
      January 22
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      Thank you so much for reading and leaving encouraging words for me, AND for adding me to your Favs List. What an honor you bestow upon me.

      Luv & hugs, BonnieQ


  • A63-Angel
    January 22
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    nice job and best of luck in contest.


  • creationsfromheart
    January 22

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    Aw very Nice

    Never, thought of doing spiritual Haikus, Yet I am not a big fan of writing by the rules my self I dabble in some but I do like this I may have to try it soon


  • Danna Hobart
    January 17
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    Sweet. Thanks for entering.


    • BonnieQ silver member
      January 17
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      Thank you, Dana, for accepting my senryu into your contest. You might find it as interesting as I did: I wrote this poem before even knowing about your contest, then came on line to post it. I noted that your contest had even used words I had put into the senryu! Best wishes with the judging, for I know you will have a tough job with so much talent here at A/P
      Luv & hugs, BonnieQ

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