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Could Have Been's

Over my brow rests a hand,
the other plows ahead;
the glare of what could have been
turns me around, to face a hazy future
of what could have been’s
just up ahead.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 22, 2009

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    Creative and wonderful take on the prompt...very well written and thoughtful...

    thank you for sharing!

    mystic


  • maralisa silver member
    January 18, 2009
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa