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My words wont come

My words lay on a feild
a plain of altimate yeild.
scarttered amongst the grass
centered around my unremembered past

My words wont come
like an unstruck drum
like a blank song
with the notes so silent and long

pestered by well rounded writers
while i try and pull all-nighters
writing and writing and writing
finding it all the more unexciting

the pencil is dull now
the last words it will allow
are those unavoidable words
that seem so blurred

My words wont come
like an unfurtunate song unsung
like a young mind seemingly numb
My words wont come.

what do you think..and be honest.

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  • DistilledGin
    June 12
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    I've been there...

    lol I love this poem! I've just recently come out of a period like that where I just couldn't write. It's like that part of my brain shut off or something. But since it happened after I had my daughter, I blame it on the drugs and horomones. Great write! I'm sure all poets can relate to this.

    ~Gin


  • Karra-Mayy
    June 12

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    Your An Amazing Poet !!!

    OMG

    I Wish I Was As Good As Youu!!!

    Im Not Very Good

    But Ursz Is Amazing!

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    March 7

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    aww teddy! i think ur a good poet.


  • TheCurseOfAshlee
    March 5

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    oh wow. you are like an awesome poet ^^ do you have a myspace? lol. like seriously? i wanna add you.


  • Creed Trees
    February 26

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    Wow so its great when you "Return the Favor"

    uhhh so here's what I got to say about the poem...

    This is very nice and expresses a lot of true feelings and is more less a free write.

    However "words" are just words to me anyways and your words are coming. Try to write something else and I bet you can.

    I'm not sure if this poem is about writersblock but if so it really showed a true meaning.

    Good write Jor


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    January 29
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    i think we have all been here at some point. your poem described it perfectly


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 23
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    its cute


  • RavenWings
    January 22

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    your still good

    hey saw your sister today . she looks great. your brother semes to be doing good. we should hang out sometime soon. miss my best friend.


  • XxVampyressxX
    January 22

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    i love it and the rhyming scheme it was amazing. its clever just like you on days you want to be we need to talk soon


  • HeartbrokenVampire
    January 17
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    i love this my teddy!!! its really clever!!!
    love you loads!!!!!


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    January 17

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    I really like this its very well written I hate being uninspired too especially about things witch are uppsetting me about my past


  • Mister Monday
    January 17
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    o.o This is a good poem. I like it. :] Great writeee. Keep it upppp. Lol.

    ~Monday.

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