I have a dream,
that can be summed up
in one sentence.
One that is age old,
still new
and not yet completed.
My dream...
it's the same as that of Dr.
Martin Luther King Jr.
Author notes
not that great in my opinion...
A contest entry
- In Honor Of Martin Luther King by Shantti.
575 points, ended January 20, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Cool...
Short & sweet with a great sentiment that changed the world... Whats not to love?
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Martin luther king jr is my true inspiration. How he tirelessly devoted his life to his dream of equality.
And yes, saying your dream is the same as his does truly some it up.
Keep writing,
Holly. -
It is he that showed us the way
The man he was truly the man with the ultimate plan that joined all people together as one . For he saw not color but the human being beofre him and what giftes we had to share with one another we just had to stop and look and listen .
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Great
If only the whole world shared this dream. At least there's a few of us.....chael check out fragmentation on my sight
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I thought the sentiment is beautiful.
It's short, but to the point.
Thank you for your entry. -
Words to share...dream on and watch it come to completion now...Blessings.
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dont be so hard on yourself. it wasnt a bad write. that dream is something to be proud of...we should all have it!
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