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I knew..I'd never be able to handle this well.

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10 words only--this was a toughy. you'd think it would be easy but no.

A contest entry

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  • August Starlight silver member
    January 20

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    Congrats on the trophy.
    I've tried entering contests like that but... no.
    I cannot do them at all lol.

  • This holds depth and meaning... x

  • well that's depressing, nice write.


    • lysdarling
      January 16
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      thank you. it's an entry for a contest! you are only allowed to use 10 words. a little more difficult than i had thought at first

      • oh i know! we're competing! yea with limited word usage it's best to chooe your words well and make each one count, if you can get multiple meanins out of every word then you're golden

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