With your eyes of plum madness, stare over me into the pale blue.
Back on the ice we can float together in crimson,
in white, and black inky snow.
I love you like summer,
like winter, like rain.
I hold onto those curls, pale yellow, like the roses in your lips.
And there you lay,
with your eyes abloom, and your chest no more to rise and fall
like tears on winter, like snow never to reach.
Its cold when you leave; I miss you so much.
I feel the tears in my eyes rim like raindrops; down curtains.
We dance in black. We laugh in white. We kiss in blue.
Essence of a bruise, that one by your chin. The last time I saw you...
the hole in your pale cream madness. Burns like hell.
I hate the way you love, so far goddamn away
I want and I DO NEED what you offer
want me want me want me want me please, Dakota.
Don't force me away,
with eyes like the sky and lips like the moon.
Don't lie to me now, I dont need your hate,
your heated demeanor. My lips caress your ears,
Cold as coal whitewhitewhite
I hate you. I need you. You complete what I am,
or should I say, used to be.
You've left me here, to rot in the rain, with your silver haired flicker
bang you're away.
The slam of the door, never hurt so good.
The rush of my tears, never so fresh on my cheeks.
I want to go fast, but you're making me slow.
I want to go north,but you are what you are.
And Dakota is essence
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dang talent is probably your middle name
thanks for entering
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thanks for entering!
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AMAZING!!!!!!!
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I liked this alot, especially the "rot in the rain" part. Good luck in my contest.
{Degenerate♥} Sarah.♥
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This is a great piece, although I was hoping that you would write more about her, not so much your feelings for her. Give her character and life. But great job. Best to you in the contest
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I am going to judge this contest in 2 hours. I really hope to see your entry then
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There you go.
I was sorta pissed when I wrote it, but I got into the whole thing.
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