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To look at you

To look at you
I see a guy
that's not shy

what makes you tick
how do you feel inside
all that I see is your skin

what a art piece
that God made
so stand there naked

I know this if you had wings
you would be a beautiful angel
but as well you could be the son of hell


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  • thepoetssoul
    January 18

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    Some people can be so critical, I for one loved this piece.Thank you for the entry, best to you in all you ever do.

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    January 18

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    Couple of spell errors here...'angle' should be 'angel' and in the last line 'coulnd' is 'could' also 'their' should be 'there' Good luck in the contest. C

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