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A fading picture of Repose

Winter shades and pacific blue;
Quantities of endless string
wrapped in this reality true
to only the eyes.

They are avian disks, floating,
in the summer sky
wondering when
the eclipse will come.

But the concavity lies.
There is light elsewhere;
on shell white walls
and wasted papers, sown
into verity,

but not here, where I lie.

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  • Creed Trees
    February 24
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    I couldn't understand this one but it's written beautifully, like you always have written.


  • NyteShade
    January 16

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    Interesting poem you have here Arty.
    I like the flow of this piece
    Blends all nicely together

    NS