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Here You Are, Darling

Here you are darling
I give you my world
It's small and unseeing
But with you, it is strong

Here you are darling
I give you my soul
It may not be pure
But with you, it is whole

Here you are darling
I give you my dream
Some say it is worthless
But with you, it is gold

Here you are darling
I give you my heart
Be careful, it's broken
But with you, it will heal

Here you are darling
I give you my love
I hope that you'll take it
'Cause with you, lies my life.

Author notes

This one could be better, but I ran out of ideas for it. If you have any please let me know. Anyone getting sick of reading my mushy love poems yet? xD lol. Hope you like.

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  • AllYoullNeverHave
    January 16, 2009

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    No way sis! I am not sick of reading your mushy love poems. It's different from normal and a little unusual. (Is there a reason for that???) But your love poems are good. I really enjoy them. You capture the emotion very well. I really enjoy this one.

    "I give you my soul
    It may not be pure
    But with you, it is whole"

    I love that part. I love all of this. Sometimes it takes another person to fix everything, to make a person what they are suppose to be. Good job. Keep writing. Love you, sis!

    ♥Chelsea